In the contemporary era, it is often noticed that the underaged migrate to urban areas from remote places for numerous causes. Education and job opportunities are the most prominent among them. There exist both benefits and drawbacks in the context of this situation. This essay examines both views full-fledged and in the furtherance declares which is overshadowed.
Firstly, let us discuss the positive aspects of this development. Although it is tough to leave your native place and accustom to a new environment, the youth is extensively fascinated regarding the idea of moving to a city for higher studies. Besides embracing some of the best institutions they also offer practical exposure related to study. For example, Hyderabad has Osmania university which is the best in this sate. Moreover, almost all the major industries and companies are situated in major towns rather than villages. These provide a huge number of jobs for the young who are desperate to earn a living. For instance, Delhi is the hub for automobile industries whereas, Banglore is the heart of software companies in the country.
On the contrary, there are some shortcomings. The urban environment has many grim effects on the lives of residents. Prolonged traffic jams and increasing pollution makes these places tough to live. For example, even though Dubai is a well-developed area it has enormous amounts of pollution. Also, people of these places experience many health hazards ranging from physical illness to fatal diseases. Thus, urban life lacks the peace of living compared to villages. A medical survey states that city people are most viable for many physical and mental diseases.
Urban mobilization is a trending situation but has both advantages and disadvantages nonetheless. But obviously the former outnumber the latter. Hence, it can be concluded that it is majorly beneficial anyhow.
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- the bar charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing coutries and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990 73
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 61
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33779264214 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90063170304 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612040133779 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5370170151 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2380952381 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119087114163 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291094625828 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302936083287 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658846069474 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102701859371 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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