Your rental accommodation was recently damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord and sya:
- Explain what caused the damage
- Why do you need them to fix the problem right away?
- What needs to be done to fix it?
Dear Mr. Hasani,
I regret to inform you how I became disappointed with the situation of my house after last week’s storm. As you know, that was very destructive and has made plenty of radical damages.
To begin with, the high-speed tornadar caused breakage of windows’ glasses. Also, some of the branchs of the tree in front of the entrance door have broken.
I would like these damages will receive your immediate attention because the temperature is going to reduce through future days. According to the forecast prediction, the temperature will be minus 3 at weekend, and obviously, without glasses we will be frozen after some hours. Also, those crushed branches collapsed the entrance way and we have struggle to entry the house.
In order to rectify this situation, I think the windows have to be fixed by a repairman. All the glasses need to be replaced as most of them have broken or cracked. Collecting those broken branches can be done by some special organization that you can find their number in the Internet.
I hope this problem will be resolved as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...sed breakage of windows’ glasses. Also, some of the branchs of the tree in front of the ent...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'struggled'.
Suggestion: struggled
... collapsed the entrance way and we have struggle to entry the house. In order to rec...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely, Yalda Asgari.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, i think, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97368421053 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63295227323 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663157894737 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.633315771 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.75 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141451521608 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476970758225 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323415682879 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654122214561 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388757837488 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.