you have recently participated in a training course Write a letter and give feedback to the organiser Give details about the course What did you like about the course give some suggestions for improvement

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you have recently participated in a training course.Write a letter and give feedback to the organiser.
Give details about the course.
What did you like about the course?
give some suggestions for improvement?

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in regards to a training course I did from your institute to get promoted for a next grade in my job.

I have found this course very interesting. Actually, it was based on computer application skills. I learnt to solve umpteen business problems within a minute by using latest versions.I spent two hours daily and it took almost four weeks to complete. I intended to finish my every task before deadlines, and fortunately I became able to do this. Eventually, my performance in a company became much better now, so my manager upgraded my job level.I especially like the way of your trainer to teach us.

I understand that other employees may also need this type of courses, but due to evening time classes most of them cannot attend it. So, the timing of this course would be flexible.As a result, everyone or anyone could take benefit of this opportunity.

I am very appreciate with your staff.

Yours faithfully,
Jasmeet kour

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the way of your trainer to teach us.
the way of your trainers to teach us.

anyone could take benefit of this opportunity.
anyone could take the benefit of this opportunity.

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