Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about one incident that happened to me in the supermarket located in Board Road.
My name is Jerry and I, as a software engineer, lived one block away from the supermarket. I often visit it twice a weekto purchase daily necessities since the supermarket is quite near my apartment building.
Yesterday was Sunday and I went to the mart to buy some sea food, snacks and fruits. Unfortunately, when I was trying to pick up a fish, I fell down because the floor was wet and extremely slippery. In addition, there was no staff around and no warning sign ei...
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Sentence: I often visit it twice a weekto purchase daily necessities since the supermarket is quite near my apartment building.
Error: weekto Suggestion: week to
Sentence: The supermarket is located in the center of the residental area and thousands of customers shop in it.
Error: residental Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: You, as the manager of the super market, is responsible for maintaining a comfortable and safe place for people to do shoping.
Error: shoping Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 177 200
No. of Characters: 781 1000
No. of Different Words: 114 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.647 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.412 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.658 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 45 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.022 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.083 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.757 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4