Few people perceive that bicycles as a primary means of transportation are quite beneficial. Others, in contrast, believe that this has more drawbacks. As per my accord, using bicycles to commute is mostly disadvantageous. This essay analyzes both views and provides information justifying my agreement.
To begin with, bicycle usage has many demerits such as time consumption and these can only cover short distances. Firstly, traveling on these requires a lot of time which is not optimum as today's world is a high paced one. People are extremely busy and do not wants to waste time just to move from one place to another. For example, a bicycle takes almost three times more time to cover a certain distance compared to any other motor-driven vehicle. So, it wastes precious time of passengers who can utilize it for other important purposes. Secondly, practically, a bicycle can only cover short distances. Reaching very distant locations needs huge effort from its riders, thus this is quite exhausting to them. As an illustration, for people who stay miles away from their workplace, it is impossible to go to work on a bicycle. Thus, it is only effective for short journeys.
On the other hand, it also has some advantages like reduction of pollution and it is a good physical activity. Cycling is an eco-friendly travel method as it does not include and fuel combustion and smoke emission. Thus it constitutes a better environment altogether. For instance, villages that have more bicycles have less air pollution when compared to cities that usually use cars and motorbikes. So, it helps in establishing an environment that is free from contamination. Also, cycling is a good exercise for our muscles. Since people barely pay attention to daily physical activity as they have quite less leisure time, this can be a good activity to improve health and fitness. Hence, this is necessary to keep ourselves in good shape.
In conclusion, using a bicycle has advantages like reduction of pollution. However, it has more significant disadvantages like wastage of time. Obviously, the disadvantages are more significant than the benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03438395415 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83346465186 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553008595989 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 349.0 20.2975951904 1719% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1757.0 106.682146367 1647% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 349.0 20.7667163134 1681% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 173.0 7.06120827912 2450% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165045606552 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165045606552 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113494682522 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555830336804 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 176.8 13.0946893788 1350% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -291.22 50.2224549098 -580% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 140.6 11.3001002004 1244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.06 8.58950901804 292% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 141.6 10.1190380762 1399% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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