According to statistical data nowadays the studying of science among the students is becoming less than in the past.
The aim of the following essay is to understand what the issue stems from and explain possible consequences if the situation is not tackled.
Looking at the roots of declining interest in science among the students, the less financial support of learners by the government may be seen as a primary cause of this issue. When the state doesn’t allocate enough money to supporting science the beginning researchers don’t develop their ideas due lack of the money. Besides, the introduction of social media is perhaps less obvious, but a more deeply rooted factor. By this, it is implied that these days and years the easy way of earning is widely promoted via various media channels. For example, the most common social media was promoted the way that show how people can earn money by sitting at home and using only a computer keyboard.
Such a tendency may engender long-term outcomes. First and foremost, the new discoveries will not be introduced to our lives, in other words the world will stay at this level without thriving, even human evolution can be threatened. For instance, the new way of early diagnosis or treatment of some dangerous infection or AIDS remains an unresolved issue of the 21st century. Secondly, the government will face problems such as a lack of teachers, mathematicians and scientists in the future due to the declining number of those who specialize in science. For example, more people do not want to spend their time studying at university for 4-6 years when society promotes the easy way to earn.
To conclude, it is evident that the lack of enough attention and stimulation from the government in science and introduction of social media may be seen as main roots leading to decline of choosing science.In addition, this problem may bring the permanent consequences for human as well as the state will face with a shortage of workers in science and not development of main parts of existence.
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...development of main parts of existence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72996703585 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2621756552 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.538461538 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16377614 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482153822733 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443464808717 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897994030055 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224607106145 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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