The bar chart illustrates the number of people in the UK eating more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart represents the percentage of people in three group, woman, children and men, who consume more than 5 portions of vegetables and fishes in a course of a day over the period of 6 years from 2011.
Apparently, at first glance, throughout the period, woman rank first in terms of percent, followed by men then kids. Overall, three rackets both have an upward trend despite fluctuations.
In the first three years, while the number of women remained stable, that of men observed a steadily modest increase, from 17 to 19. Children subgroup, meanwhile, witnessed a rise of 4 percent before dropped to 12.
In the course of another three years from 2014 to 2015, only woman group experienced an upsurge. In 2014, the number fleeted from 20 to 28 and then reached 33 and 36 in 2015, 2016 respectively. On the contrary, men and junior rackets saw a parallel trend which was rising slightly in the first two year of the course before descended. They, however still culminated in a higher proportion.
In 2017, contradicting to the propitiously uphill trend, woman subgroup plunge into only 30. On the opposite scenario, men and children rose moderately by the margin of 3 and 2 percentage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, still, then, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88292682927 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74279110286 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629268292683 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6113348833 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0800948892106 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262747354516 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662367974377 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535446653101 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900839752579 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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