Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that to be a success in sport they should have physical strength. However, some people argue such mental strength have more important. Although these can help players in order to support their confidence, it is claimed that such body strength is crucial for being stable with their performance.
It is true that having a mentality in sport can lead them to be successful players because when those are able to focus on that field, their confidence should exist in their minds. This is because being confident tends to make them easier to tackle many obstacles, and it also can maintain their feeling to have a positive vibe so they can avoid mental exhaustion. For example, Jakarta's Football Club in Indonesia before joining the national tournament should take a break for two weeks for holiday in order to make them relax because it can make their mental issues still stable. Despite the fact that might be acceptable, I think being confident is not enough, so they should have reliable playing techniques and physical stamina.
On the other hand, some people believe that having physical strength is a fundamental issue that should be owned by any athlete as their performance tends to be more stable when they play such sports. That is to say, the athletes might use to keep practicing about the sport so they might not be exhausted because the stamina is still at an excellent level, and rarely did they get an injury. According to the International Soccer Magazine, Christian Ronaldo the successful soccer player who has many achievements is consistently active to exercise every day in the early morning to keep his body moving so his performance is always stable in the field. Therefore, stability in any relation of the exercise is the key factor for a successful player of the sport.
In conclusion, In spite of having a healthy mentality is important for players due to release their stress, I believe these issues should combine first with their outstanding body strength. Where possible, top athletes should manage their time for practicing their physical strength but still be aware to take care of their mental health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98891966759 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55644904929 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501385041551 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2348115753 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.538461538 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209786129111 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976051357611 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760010856814 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149290133576 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632878623066 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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