The bar chart shows the total value of Southland’s foreign sales for international tourism, dairy products and meat products in 2000 and 2015. It also provides a forecast for 2025. Overall, we can observe an upward trend for the international tourist industry over the entire period, and a contrast pattern for meat products. Furthermore, meat exportations have been the least important branch in 2000 and in 2015, and it is forecasted that they will continue to decrease in the future. On the other hand, fresh-milk products have currently increased their sales, whereas in the future the situatio...
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