Youngsters nowadays are privileged to have easy access to schooling, which was once considered upper-class. Yet an increasing number of students found learning off-putting and repulsive after graduation. In this essay I will illustrate some causes for the downbeat state of mind and then offer a couple of possible solutions which should be implemented to deal with this issue.
To begin, it is undeniable that our education system has its flaws. As many adolescents, along with adults, declare that their creativity and interests were somehow stifled by textbooks and school regulations. Thi...
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