An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry Why do you think it is the case Do you think it is a positive or negative development

The expansion of the tourism sector in developing nations is an alarming trend, and there are some reasons for this kind of development which has resulted in both positive and negative development for the society. This essay will explain the reasons for this ongoing trend and its merits and demerits in a detailed manner.

The prominent reason for developing tourism in a country is due to the economic benefits that it brings. The well-developed tourism industry creates a lot of new businesses and jobs for local people, and an influx of money from foreign tourists. In addition to this, promoting international tourism can help to improve relations with other nations by sharing a country's culture and customs with people across the globe. Apart from this, many people these days are interested in learning about different cultures and ways of living, and tourism helps to facilitate this experience.

However, there are a number of drawbacks that arise from the expansion of a country's tourism industry. For instance, in many countries in South East Asia, tourism has been a major cause of environmental pollution and destruction. Many tourists generally drink bottled water when on holiday, this creates mountains of plastics waste every year. And, many emerging nations do have a proper means of recycling methods and facilities to encounter such kind of problem. Therefore, it commonly ends up littered throughout the countryside, rivers, seas, beaches, and oceans. Moreover, the invasion of tourists into certain places can disrupt the local wildlife and ecosystems causing further environmental damage.

In conclusion, I would have to say that expanding of tourism industry in a developing country is a positive development if it is properly managed and the environmental and cultural impacts are closely monitored and minimized.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39655172414 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87831079078 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7867094458 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176611923983 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061986517558 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650324206379 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121556058033 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494378796744 0.056905535591 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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