TOEFL T P O 18 - Integrated Writing Task
The lecturer disagrees with experts opinions about the ways to avoid that the Torreya taxifolia became extint. There are the following three reasons.
First, the lecturer states that the climate changes and the global warming have modified the microclimate in the Northern Florida's. Experts consider this region microclimate suitable for Torreya growth and development. However, the lecturer explains that the higher temperatures have caused the once damped areas to became drained now.
Second, it is stated in the lecture that assisted migration, that means to move Torreya to a more suitable place, can cause an undesirable consequence. The lecturer gives the example of another plant species that was realocated to a completely different location distant from its original climate, but the assisted migration ended causing the death of the native species. Therefore, such attitude can cause a great disturbance and negative impacts in the whole local environment.
Third, the lecturer disagrees that preserve Torreya in research centers cold be a successful option. According to the lecturer, in a research center there is no large Torreya population and variety. Thus, they would not be able to survive diseases. Dispate the closest monitorement in these areas.
To sum up, the lecturer has different points of view when comparing to the experts opinions on the topics about saving Torreyas from become extint.
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- TOEFL T P O 18 Integrated Writing Task 3
- Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since digital technology is now replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[5]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'There are the followings'?
Suggestion: There are the followings
...at the Torreya taxifolia became extint. There are the following three reasons. First, the lecturer s...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...turer disagrees that preserve Torreya in research centers cold be a successful op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 219.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52054794521 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70307293313 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634703196347 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1680866939 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.42419426049 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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