In some countries governments are encouraging industries and to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of locating the business outside cities outweigh the disadvantages?
Political leaders of the any country are responsible for up lifting the standard of livings of its people. Shifting industries and business to the outskirts are one among them. In my opinion, though it is a good idea, I prefer, new companies to be started in villages and older once should be allowed to continue.
On the one hand, the decision of shifting the large firms to outskirts can benefit both peoples’ lives and environment. The presence of large factories and its employees create a number of problems in cities. Traffic congestion due to commuting, to and from the work place, will be...
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