The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the petrol price. To what extant do you agree or disagree?
It is an undeniable fact that, the environmental problems became drastic all over the world. To decrease the problems related to over use of petrol, government tend to increase the price of fuel. However, in my opinion it is not a solid way to reduce any problem related to petrol.
The progress of any society depends largely on the easy availability of energy sources. Since, petrol is used as a main energy source in various forms like, cooking oil, recharging batteries, electricity production and so on, surging fuel price will reflect in all walks of life. The increase in petrol affects the...
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Sentence: To decrease the problems related to over use of petrol, government tend to increase the price of fuel.
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Sentence: Otherwise, it will leads to insurmountable drastic impacts to the country and its citizen.
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