choosing a college or university
Choosing a college or university can be difficult. Some people consider choosing a college is a challenge and others take it as a new experience. In my opinion, the main purpose in choosing a college or school is to achieve a good future career, also to choose an affordable school in a good location.
First of all, the most difficult part in finding a university is prepares you well for your future career. In order to get a good job, the curriculum that is taught must be thorough and up-to date. In addition, the professors must be highly qualified and respected in their fields. For example, there are many teachers, professors with abundant teaching experience who teach students lots of new knowledge and help them to solve the problems in their study, which is very helpful for their future. After they finish their study in the college, students go to work in society and contributes to the different fields.
Another difficulty in choosing a university or college is affordability. Students are looking for a university that they can pay the tuition fees and living expenses. From my every day experience and observation some students require more time to adjust themselves in the university life. A college’s student has a specific budget to spend it during the course time, so he needs to find a college offer for him an economical campus life. In addition, if there are some institutions that might be able to offer a good scholarships for a student if he cannot afford the university’s fees.
Moreover, a good location is also very important when choosing a school. The environment should be safe and quite to facilitate studying. A university is a place where people from different backgrounds get opportunity to interact with each other. Therefore, choosing a good university’s environment for a student is very important. In addition, if there are possibilities for part-time or summer jobs in the student’s major that will be great. A working student has many benefits, a person can get some practical work experience and how to arrange his time to be able to combine his studding and earning money. A college’s location plays a major role in the student’s life.
To sum up, students not only care to learn lots of new knowledge in their college which is very helpful for their future and career, but also economical college in a good location make the student’s life much easier. A student should consider all of these points carefully soy he can choose the most appropriate college or university for himself.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: First of all, the most difficult part in finding a university is prepares you well for your future career.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to is and prepares
students not only care to learn lots of new knowledge in their college which is very helpful for their future and career, but also economical college in a good location make the student’s life much easier.
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
flaws:
No. of Words: 429 while No. of Different Words: 200
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
don't use:
....is very important.
....will be great.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 429 350
No. of Characters: 2058 1500
No. of Different Words: 200 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.551 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.797 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.78 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 151 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 117 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.272 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.324 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.512 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d contributes to the different fields. Another difficulty in choosing a univers...
^^^
Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'scholarship'?
Suggestion: scholarship
...ions that might be able to offer a good scholarships for a student if he cannot afford the u...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 348, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iate college or university for himself.
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240938166311 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.147121535181 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102345415778 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0426439232409 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0490405117271 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0938166311301 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0255863539446 0.0351676179071 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91419856732 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0362473347548 0.0309702414327 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00213219616205 0.00188951952338 113% => OK
Determiners: 0.117270788913 0.0887237588012 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234541577825 0.0209618222197 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191897654584 0.0139019557991 138% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2557.0 2387.08602151 107% => OK
No of words: 429.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96037296037 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361305361305 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.291375291375 0.251872472559 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20979020979 0.174417080927 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144522144522 0.112833075102 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91419856732 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475524475524 0.524397521467 91% => OK
Word variations: 52.3997756574 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7696584089 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.227272727 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 48.6375291375 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.50892857143 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241052847872 0.300154397459 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102216046667 0.103427244359 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0641142809805 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.490596294119 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134139349657 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123142865288 0.114077575197 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15913609948 0.0781384742642 204% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362282456577 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0516991071538 0.067059652881 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207849278771 0.210909579961 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119852151104 0.0618886996521 194% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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