People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress?
Stress is a common problem in new people lifestyle because they do not have time for spending with their family. Furthermore, people are always busy and cannot do exercise. There are myriad ways to encountering with this problem. I want to explain two ways in this essay that can decrease the level of stress in people life.
Firstly, practicing sports can help people for solving this problem. What I mean is that there are a large number of sports to providing a situation that make people relax. For instance, walking has beneficial effect on people health and they can spend a pleasant time in a lush and verdant park. By this way they can get a large amount of fresh weather that it helps the decrease of stroking people. Moreover, there are a lot of articles mention that the level of O2 in atmosphere has interrelationship with positive thinking. It mean is that when people take breath the weather with high level of O2 they get good feel and tend to think about positive aspect of life ,so they can release their stress. In addition, positive thinking helps their blood pressure and protecting them of the stress.
Secondly, scientists acclaim that having a pleasant leisure time with close friend and family is one of the practical ways that has key role in people life. My sister is a good example for showing this issue. The stress never has made her debilitating person. She is sociable person with vigorous personality that this issue is a good reason for appreciating her. She goes to entertainment place with their friend and spends a lot of time there, or talks about her favorite with her friend. She is not only relax, but also indicates that she rarely face with stress in her life.
As a result, I personally believe that people can control their stress very easily .They should allocating enough time to their family and doing exercise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i mean, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75925925926 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48582323934 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521604938272 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1015371924 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216548659732 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791209809881 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585676793781 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161459989128 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607187660113 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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