writing task 1 from cambridge 7

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writing task 1 from cambridge 7

The table illustrates comparison of money utilization on different activities in five countries in 2002. It is clearly obvious that similar trend is seen in all countries . In each country most of expenditure was sent on food , drinks and tobacco and least money consuming factor was education and leisure activities.

For food, drinks and tobacco Turkey was most popular country compared to other countries where 32 percent money was spent. About half of this amount was spent in itlay and Sweden . in Ireland people spent almost 29 percent and in spain about 19 percent expenditure was ...

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Sentence: In conclusion it is seen that daily grocery is most expensive item all over . on the other hand people shouldpay more attention on education and leisure activities too.
Error: shouldpay Suggestion: should pay

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Put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.

Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 216 200
No. of Characters: 1083 1000
No. of Different Words: 105 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.834 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.014 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.577 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.901 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.443 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.711 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4