TPO 10 - Question 1 Talk about a time when you accomplished something you did not think you could do. What do you accomplish? Why did you think you could not do it?

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two issues:

1. the content is not organized so well. for any topic, try to organized the reasons by First, second, like:

first, it is too high and seems too dangerous...

second, it is my fist flight...

2. there are some hesitations like 'ehm'