Job is the routine that will accompany us the entire life. So a job that fits us can not only warrant a successful career, but also be the bridge stretching to happiness. While some people choose the jobs that are very different from their parents’, I would like to choose the similar jobs.
First of all, interest is one of the most important aspects when choosing a job. Children are pliable in their early age, so they incline to be affected by their parents and become interested in their working fields. Thus, children should choose the jobs according to their interest, which tends to be in their parents’ working fields. Many children of NBA stars start playing basketball at a young age and finally enter NBA league years later. One of my classmates whose father works as a chemist fancies for chemistry as well. He used to immersed in the lab all day. In the end, he achieved gold medal in China Chemistry Olympics which helped him enter Peking University majoring in chemistry. Our parents play an important role in developing our interests which affect our career choices.
Moreover, choosing the jobs similar to your parents, you can stand on the shoulders of your parents. Parents can give children advice to avoid the mistakes once they had made, so it will be easier for the children to do well in their jobs. They will also teach the children how to meet the requirements of the works or how to please the superiors, which will help their children get promoted and have a better salary. They may have their unique techniques beyond the textbooks that would simplify your work. For example, if your father is a hunter, then he may show you where you can find the quarry; if your mom is a cook, she may give you her recipe when you run a restaurant. The experience of last generations will be the corner stone for the children.
Last but not least, a deeper understanding about the working field can be depicted through your parents’ colleagues even before you enter the job. Through daily conversations they can reveal the insight of the job multi-dimensionally. My mother works in China Academy of Science. Once she introduced me to a physicist who told me a lot about what academia were like and give me a great deal of advice in learning physics. He also taught me the academic status in different schools and introduced me some experts in the fields. With the helps of him, I prepared myself better when dealing with my academic works and make my goal clear. The familiars in the field can give the children guidance before and after they enter the career.
According to what we have discussed above, we can safely conclude that it is better for the children to choose the jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs. The interest, the experiences and the connections inherited from their parents can help them shape a successful career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... job that fits us can not only warrant a successful career, but also be the bridg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2389.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 501.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76846307385 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63600948817 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491017964072 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1908784914 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8846153846 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2692307692 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359463338322 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103907791718 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110402331661 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245547728363 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988630893322 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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