The difference between the South and the North in spring

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The difference between the South and the North in spring

Whether you are a traveller, an expat or even a local, one of the most interesting aspects of travelling through Vietnam is observing and experiencing the different between the South and the North, especially in the Spring season. While the Northern people welcome the springs in a cold weather, the South, however, is warmer in early months of the year. If the Northern city is covered by beautiful peach flowers in the spring, Southern people decorate their house with yellow apricot blossoms. Unlike the North has a variety of festivals to celebrate, people in the South usually go to pagodas to pray for health and wealthy. In conclusion, there are distinctly difference between the South and the North which make it beautiful in their own way.

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