Why People Work?

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In the modern life, everything develope from the way we live to the things around us like buildings, shops or even the park has develope. We the human, have to work, but why ?make a
Well firstly, we have to go to work inorder to make a living because in the future society we need to have money to live and make a career.
Secondly, we work to get more experience from others and you can give some of yours to the other too. Also you need to work inorder to get money to buy personal things like toothbrush, towels, toothpastes, ....
So there is a lot of reasons why we need to work, adaptation to the society, to start a career, or other reasons. So that is my reason, what do you think ? tell me.

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Average: 8.2 (5 votes)
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a lot of grammar errors.

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Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: ? 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 135 350
No. of Characters: 537 1500
No. of Different Words: 76 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 3.978 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.145 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 29 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 18 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 10 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 6 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.562 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.491 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.767 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.364 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5