ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF BEING A HOT BOY GIRL

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ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF BEING A HOT BOY/GIRL

We are born with some appearance which is innate and almost impossible to change. Some people are lucky to possess what others may envy of and are called hot boys or hot girls. However, I personally think being a hot boy or hot girl involves both advantages and disadvantages.

Being a hot boy or hot girl can be beneficial in several ways. Because normally, people prefer to be with or work with good-looking people, those ‘hot’ people have more chance to be successful at work or in doing business. The higher degree of success probability can be decided by a sense of self-confidence that other people don’t have. One important benefit, also, is that those hot boys and hot girls can save a lot as they do not need spend on fitness, body-building, and diet courses. They even waste no money at all on cosmetics and cosmetic surgery.

It is not always enjoyable to be a hot boy or a hot girl. First, you may be the focus of public attention, so you have no freedom and privacy at all. In fact, hot boys and hot girls are often hunted for beauty contests, advertisements, and entertainment shows etc. and this can be very annoying. In addition, being good looking can make you vulnerable to dangers and traps in life. Hot boys and hot girls could become targets to be attacked by the sex industry, sex abuse and harassment. Finally, a beautiful girl or a handsome man normally suffers from her or his unhappy fate. A good Vietnamese saying goes “Hồng nhan bạc phận”, which means those with good looking appearance usually lead an unfortunate life. Generally, being hot boys or hot girls, not like what many may expect, could turn to be a real nightmare.

A personal trait, appearance inclusive, may be a strength in some circumstances, but a challenge in others. A hot boy or hot girl then needs to take advantage of his or her beauty and is aware of potential threats because of this as well.

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