Advantages that makes confusion
Confusion is a mood that is in doubt, unable or difficult to respond to the problem at hand, let alone to solve it, the point is that your heart or feelings are in doubt. According to the Big Indonesian Dictionary, confusion is chaos that is chaotic in the mind. So we can translate that confusion is a condition or situation where someone is experiencing thoughts or feelings that are not chaotic (kbbi). The meaning of the word "confusion" in the present, apart from the definition that is interpreted by the Big Indonesian Dictionary has 2 meanings. First, it is a feeling that expresses confusion.
As faced with 2 choices. For example, "I'm not sure whether I want Anwar to choose Budi to be my girlfriend, both are equally good". Confusion in the sentence has the meaning "confused". Second, confusion can also be interpreted as an expression of feeling where expectations are not in accordance with the reality that happens or is obtained. Like, breaking up or love that never arrived. Example (1), "I was upset, just yesterday broke up with him". Example (2), "I'm upset, he doesn't understand, he's not sensitive if I like him"(Wikipedia).
On this occasion I will express my confusion in writing which concerns the various aspects of confusion during the COVID 19 pandemic. As we know, COVID 19 is a universal disaster in which almost all countries in the world are affected by this pandemic. From here, we can guess what kind of turmoil that arises, according to the author: during a pandemic like now there are various kinds of impacts that arise, starting with negative impacts (losses) and of course positive impacts (benefits), but this time the writer feels there is no need. in writing various kinds of negative impacts because almost all sectors are negatively affected.
And furthermore, the author is interested in writing about the advantages that are troubling, especially for writers, where according to the COVID 19 author's mind set there is no reason the author said that! Because there are many rumors circulating that are not necessarily true and sometimes proven by our common sense. For example, where COVID 19, according to some groups of people, is part of a global conspiracy that benefits a party, the benefits obtained according to the issues circulating in the communities are that this virus was deliberately created for commercial gain, the profit from selling this viral vaccine, but the author and you may not necessarily believe this because until now this vaccine is not clear about the source and the patent rights so this cannot be proven.
And there are those who think this virus doesn't exist! Ignoring health protocols, this group assumes that this virus actually does not exist. So I asked a little, "so if there is no virus, how can the government get the data of the millions of infected people? "This is just a game of medical people in which they think that the person in charge of the health sector is deliberately making up about an infected person! "What's the advantage for that, dude?" the advantage, of course, what else if it's not money because ordinary money makes people forget that humans are social creatures who cannot think of themselves.
Money is obtained from a number of patients who have recorded COVID 19, government funds will go to hospitals and it is here that fraud begins. Another reason according to this group's opinion is that at the time of the simultaneous student demonstrations being held recently which created a very large crowd consisting of all levels of society. Fortunately, there has not been a significant increase in the COVID 19 case because many of my fellow writers who participated in celebrating demonstrations, whether on campus or outside, were fine, it also indicated that the community shared the same mindset as the author: COVID 19 between existing and nothing makes them reference even though one mind-set does not mean the author is referring to the calm health protocol. The author is a person who obeys the rules lol. That is what sometimes makes writers, in particular, there are internal turmoil, where there is often conflicting management to obey the protocol or ignore it, where the theory and logic of this pandemic go hand in hand, which makes the writer confusion.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 611, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is a feeling that expresses confusion. As faced with 2 choices. For example, &apo...
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Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...aced with 2 choices. For example, 'Im not sure whether I want Anwar to choose...
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Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...oke up with him'. Example 2, 'Im upset, he doesnt understand, hes not se...
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Line 2, column 510, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: doesn't
...im'. Example 2, 'Im upset, he doesnt understand, hes not sensitive if I like...
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Suggestion: he's
..., 'Im upset, he doesnt understand, hes not sensitive if I like him'Wikipe...
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...time the writer feels there is no need. in writing various kinds of negative impac...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...nd there are those who think this virus doesnt exist! Ignoring health protocols, this ...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...king up about an infected person! 'Whats the advantage for that, dude?' the...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 178, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...egins. Another reason according to this groups opinion is that at the time of the simu...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, apart from, for example, in particular, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 48.0 7.0 686% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 40.0 3.15609756098 1267% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 65.0 5.60731707317 1159% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 33.7804878049 240% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3618.0 965.302439024 375% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 720.0 196.424390244 367% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.025 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.18004012822 3.73543355544 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87371952161 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 347.0 106.607317073 325% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481944444444 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1135.8 283.868780488 400% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 8.94146341463 291% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.09334768 43.030603864 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.153846154 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 1.13902439024 1493% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16843563969 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450198045395 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619562388775 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789984516094 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361855762092 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 181.0 40.7170731707 445% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 611, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is a feeling that expresses confusion. As faced with 2 choices. For example, &apo...
^^^^
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...aced with 2 choices. For example, 'Im not sure whether I want Anwar to choose...
^^
Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...oke up with him'. Example 2, 'Im upset, he doesnt understand, hes not se...
^^
Line 2, column 510, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...im'. Example 2, 'Im upset, he doesnt understand, hes not sensitive if I like...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 529, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
..., 'Im upset, he doesnt understand, hes not sensitive if I like him'Wikipe...
^^^
Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...time the writer feels there is no need. in writing various kinds of negative impac...
^^
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...nd there are those who think this virus doesnt exist! Ignoring health protocols, this ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...king up about an infected person! 'Whats the advantage for that, dude?' the...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 178, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...egins. Another reason according to this groups opinion is that at the time of the simu...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, apart from, for example, in particular, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 48.0 7.0 686% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 40.0 3.15609756098 1267% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 65.0 5.60731707317 1159% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 33.7804878049 240% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3618.0 965.302439024 375% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 720.0 196.424390244 367% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.025 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.18004012822 3.73543355544 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87371952161 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 347.0 106.607317073 325% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481944444444 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1135.8 283.868780488 400% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 8.94146341463 291% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.09334768 43.030603864 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.153846154 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 1.13902439024 1493% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16843563969 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450198045395 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619562388775 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789984516094 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361855762092 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 181.0 40.7170731707 445% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.