The statements is a report that appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public Health Council. They claim that an innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in schools and workplaces. There are so many reasons in the following statement.
First of all, the statement claims that people living in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high and it means they eat more fish. Although fish have very high consumption, it cannot prove they are all eaten by people from East Meira. It might be that these people from East Maira always made them and sold them to other places, even if they like to give fish as a gift. We need more evidence to prove this opinion. It concluded that people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. It cannot prove that people from East Meira meet less doctors because they always eat fish. We need some evidence to prove that people from East Meria are less likely to meet doctors because they are less likely to have less sickness. They might eat some medicine at home or they are very poor even if they don't have any money to meet a doctor. It does not mean they have a healthy body. We also need more evidence to prove that these people only eat fish. They may also eat vegetables and always exercise so their body is very healthy.
Secondly, the statement claims that since colds represent the post frequently given reason for absences from school and work. We need more evidences to ensure these reasons are true. Usually due to some reasons people will write a fake reason. Some people are true and others are false. So we must prove it is true.
Finally, this statement claims that they recommend the daily use of a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism. We need to know this fish oil can prevent colds and lower absenteeism. Maybe due to the diel there is a considerable difference and it does not work.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
The statements is a report that appeared in the newslette...
^^
Line 2, column 578, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun doctors is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... prove that people from East Meira meet less doctors because they always eat fish. W...
^^^^
Line 2, column 836, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...home or they are very poor even if they dont have any money to meet a doctor. It doe...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 28.8173652695 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 357.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6106442577 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30460897513 2.78398813304 83% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478991596639 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 4.96107784431 282% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.998755013 57.8364921388 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8181818182 119.503703932 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2272727273 23.324526521 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136064573033 0.218282227539 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503302739052 0.0743258471296 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11842023565 0.0701772020484 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162411234171 0.128457276422 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.252618999316 0.0628817314937 402% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 14.3799401198 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.3550499002 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.197005988 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.5979740519 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.32208582834 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
The statements is a report that appeared in the newslette...
^^
Line 2, column 578, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun doctors is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... prove that people from East Meira meet less doctors because they always eat fish. W...
^^^^
Line 2, column 836, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...home or they are very poor even if they dont have any money to meet a doctor. It doe...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 28.8173652695 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 357.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6106442577 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30460897513 2.78398813304 83% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478991596639 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 4.96107784431 282% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.998755013 57.8364921388 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8181818182 119.503703932 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2272727273 23.324526521 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136064573033 0.218282227539 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503302739052 0.0743258471296 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11842023565 0.0701772020484 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162411234171 0.128457276422 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.252618999316 0.0628817314937 402% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 14.3799401198 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.3550499002 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.197005988 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.5979740519 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.32208582834 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.