The first is about a wave-energy machine and the second one is about which location should about wave-energy machines.
This wave-energy has a theory about air. First of all, the air flow into this turbine, at the same time, the wave makes the water levels rise. And make another air flow into this turbine. These wind will be made the turbine turn out and make electricity generator.
Secondly, It has a terrible thing is to choose from its location. It should be in the near sea. We should to look for large waves and put them on it. But It means more installation costs. Because of it usually, in the deeper sea, more large waves will have more output, fewer waves will get low output. In other words, it means high installation casts will make more profit but it will show in the long term. But low output will can’t get more profit.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, second, secondly, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52287581699 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27841299832 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1460493304 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.6666666667 112.824112599 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.75 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17478848655 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650806248779 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456870223964 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11446581684 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172349639057 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.2329268293 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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