To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I can only agree with part of this statement. There are some reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, people always get some impression from major cities in other Country. These cities include New York City in United States, Toronto in Canada, Sydney in Australia, Beijing and Shanghai in China, etc. These cities have some common characteristics, such as developed economy, open for all the countries, have beautiful scenery and famous tour cities, etc. Some important features are infant rate and death rate, average lifetime etc, they are unwise. From this city lists, you can found that New York City have people from all the country, there are too many different customs and it can only represent part of America. In fact there are so many different style states in USA. New York, Toronto, Sydney, Shanghai etc, these almost mean freedom. If you want to look for the most important characteristics of a society, you should to research smaller cities.
Secondly, if you try understand health level from these major cities, it might not accurate. Because the air pollution is very serious in some big cities. The air pollution in New York City is more serious than other cities, but it cleaner than Beijing or other major city. Some people have not very well health in seriously pollution area.
Finally, as everyone knows, Shanghai is a developed city and China is a developing country. If you only study Shanghai, you will cannot understand some under low-income cities. In fact the major cities are special case.
To sum up, we should study these major cities and these cities are representative, but if people want to understand the most important characteristics of a society, only study these cities is not enough.
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...t part of America. In fact there are so many different style states in USA. New York, Toronto,...
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...se major cities, it might not accurate. Because the air pollution is very serious in so...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, in fact, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 290.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01034482759 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57355295106 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510344827586 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.600210952 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7222222222 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18849216201 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691826261161 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090663754752 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120465344318 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021218107583 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.