Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit

The author argues that routine administration of inoculations to all people in areas where the disease is found might save a lot of lives and author also adds that there is a chance that a person may pass away due to periodic intake of inoculations. The above argument can be flawed because it lies on unsupported assumption.

The author assumes that inoculations is the only cause for reduction of cow flu. Since the above assumption is not mentioned clearly what if the people in affected are aware of flu and started to take care about their health by following hygienic diet and doing regular work outs moreover by avoiding outside food. If the author would have mentioned clearly that people did not change their food habits and followed same diet before the flu affected the area and at present.

The author also assumes that vaccination should be given routinely to all people. Since the above assumption is not mentioned clearly what if routine vaccination may lead to over dosage in children which may have negative affects. If author would have mentioned clearly that regular dosage to children and adults is same and it does not affect any one due to over dosage.

The author assume that many lives might be saved if inoculations is given regularly. Since the above assumption is not mentioned clearly what if many represent hundred in thousand or six hundred in a eight hundred population. If the author would have mentioned clearly that how many people are saved instead of mentioning many.

The author assume that there is a small possibility of a person to die due to regular intake of inoculations. Since the above assumption is not mentioned clearly what if people might have died due to accidents and also author did not mention the number of people died. If the author would have mentioned clearly that people died only because of regular in take of inoculations and the count of the humans died due to inoculations instead of mentioning a small number.

The author argument fails because it has following flaws statistical, causal, sampling. This can be fixed if author would have mentioned clearly about the number of people saved and the number of people died, inoculation is the only cure and clear data about dosage in routine administration.

Votes
Average: 5 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e it lies on unsupported assumption. The author assumes that inoculations is the...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had mentioned'?
Suggestion: had mentioned
...by avoiding outside food. If the author would have mentioned clearly that people did not change thei...
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Message: Did you mean 'had mentioned'?
Suggestion: had mentioned
...ch may have negative affects. If author would have mentioned clearly that regular dosage to children...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'assumes'.
Suggestion: assumes
...y one due to over dosage. The author assume that many lives might be saved if inocu...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...entioned clearly what if many represent hundred in thousand or six hundred in a eight h...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...early what if many represent hundred in thousand or six hundred in a eight hundred popul...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t hundred in thousand or six hundred in a eight hundred population. If the author...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... hundred in a eight hundred population. If the author would have mentioned clearly...
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Message: Did you mean 'had mentioned'?
Suggestion: had mentioned
...eight hundred population. If the author would have mentioned clearly that how many people are saved ...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'assumes'.
Suggestion: assumes
...stead of mentioning many. The author assume that there is a small possibility of a ...
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Message: Did you mean 'had mentioned'?
Suggestion: had mentioned
...he number of people died. If the author would have mentioned clearly that people died only because o...
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Message: Did you mean 'had mentioned'?
Suggestion: had mentioned
..., sampling. This can be fixed if author would have mentioned clearly about the number of people save...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 385.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92727272727 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61862241191 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394805194805 0.468620217663 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 705.55239521 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.039616414 57.8364921388 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5625 119.503703932 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 5.70786347227 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219494329695 0.218282227539 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945279336786 0.0743258471296 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706673953343 0.0701772020484 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137089967302 0.128457276422 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596954908494 0.0628817314937 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.3799401198 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.32208582834 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 98.500998004 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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