To know whether children in Tertia are reared by an entire village but not by their biological parent,
May not be fully come to the conclusion, the study doesn’t put hay on many of the parameters.
To come to the conclusion we have to look into few others aspect as well, which are:
Firstly, Dr Field has this observation near about twenty years ago, this may be true that time but may not be now. In twenty years lot of things changed, the child, Rakesh, who was six to seven year of age might have become a mature, debonair and responsible adult. In this childhood, he might have spend more time with the vicinity indigenes. Rakesh might have observed and felt bad, and he does not want the same thing to happen with his own child. As soon as Rakesh became a father, we wanted to spend more time with the child, playing around, talking and doing some useful household work. So the generation gap of twenty years might have change the trend in the village of tertia.
Secondly, The author, say that children spend more talking about their biological parent, that does not mean they are spending time with their parents, they might be talking to the other people about their parents because they know each and every thing about their parents, they live with parents see every day morning and evening. Moreover, there is a high chance of possibility that children are studying in the boarding school, they are missing there parents and sharing there talk with the close friend. This trend might be not present twenty years ago, that studies were not given too much importance, there might shift in trend here as well.
Thirdly, the Dr.field has only stated about the Tertia island no the vicinity islands. So the new method is also taking place in vicinity of the Tertia island where the conclusion might be different.
Due to the above stated reason I think that the interviewed –centered method that the graduate students are using to know the trend may get the accurate result but may be different result.There are lots of other parameters on which this argument depends on without looking into all the other parameters this argument is mooted
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, i think, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 376.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77393617021 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28463329377 2.78398813304 82% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 204.123752495 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51329787234 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4844797417 57.8364921388 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.076923077 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9230769231 23.324526521 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 5.70786347227 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223399966988 0.218282227539 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853844492609 0.0743258471296 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532777209318 0.0701772020484 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107784933374 0.128457276422 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107857858368 0.0628817314937 172% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.3799401198 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.3550499002 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.197005988 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.9071856287 151% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 378 350
No. of Characters: 1726 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.566 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.114 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.126 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.341 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.622 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5