The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company."According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than i

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The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.
"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

The argument state that super screen-production movies have a good review but does fewcr people are attending the show, production manegement has decided to allocate a greater share of its buget in advertisement. stated in this way fails to mention several key factors. The author assumption does not provide clear evidences on which his conclusion is based on. Therefore the conclusion is unconvincing.

Firstly, its fails to claim that whether the source of the report is correct, because there are lot place the markerting people may have neglected or put the ambigious factors. First of all, super screen management should check the source and credability of it before making any decision. A good qaulity of time is need in order to analysis the report, but the result and action will be in the correct dicrection rather than in pondering some where else in the wrong decision.

Secondly, did the management saw the show timing are they suitable for the localites? may be super-screen is close on saturday and sunday, and opened on weekdays. when most the people go to office and don't have time for the movies. And on weekends when people are free there are not showes available. And did management look out the reachability from the place the super-screen movie is screening, there is a high chance that people may have some travelling issues, no cabs to to go back home in the night after the movie is over. Or there may be possiblilty that movie theater situated a far away from the city. people can't afford the time as well as vehical. Though the arguments says that few people gave the review which are good, this means that people who can afford to go they are going and liking the movies. Hence the review are good but not the quan.

Thirdly, may be the cost of the movie ticket is very high. people who have the great prediliction towards the actors , actress or movie can afford it. Other people will go to some movie because of the economcal factor.

In conclusion, due to above mentioned factors the arguments are been flawed. In order to increase the buget for the marketing may not lead to the specific that management is looking for. we make the proper decision, we have make the proper analysis on it, till then this is mooted.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Stated
...er share of its buget in advertisement. stated in this way fails to mention several ke...
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Line 1, column 363, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...es on which his conclusion is based on. Therefore the conclusion is unconvincing. Fi...
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Line 4, column 439, Rule ID: SOME_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhere'?
Suggestion: somewhere
...ect dicrection rather than in pondering some where else in the wrong decision. Second...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: May
...ng are they suitable for the localites? may be super-screen is close on saturday an...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...day and sunday, and opened on weekdays. when most the people go to office and dont h...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... when most the people go to office and dont have time for the movies. And on weeken...
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Line 7, column 475, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ay have some travelling issues, no cabs to to go back home in the night after the mov...
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Line 7, column 614, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: People
...ater situated a far away from the city. people cant afford the time as well as vehical...
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Line 7, column 621, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tuated a far away from the city. people cant afford the time as well as vehical. Tho...
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Line 7, column 818, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...o they are going and liking the movies. Hence the review are good but not the quan. ...
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Line 10, column 60, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: People
... cost of the movie ticket is very high. people who have the great prediliction towards...
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Line 10, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he great prediliction towards the actors , actress or movie can afford it. Other p...
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Line 13, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: We
...pecific that management is looking for. we make the proper decision, we have make ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 2260.96107784 83% => OK
No of words: 392.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7806122449 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55292508006 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9566132712 57.8364921388 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1818181818 119.503703932 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 23.324526521 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.70786347227 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204498216019 0.218282227539 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534767766823 0.0743258471296 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603209510628 0.0701772020484 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103464036153 0.128457276422 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548442818213 0.0628817314937 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.3799401198 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.5979740519 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 393 350
No. of Characters: 1815 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.452 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.618 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.476 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.562 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.565 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.568 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5