Most people recognize the benefits of individuality, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity.-GRE Issue 58
Personal economic success might be due either to one's investment strategy or to one's work or career. With respect to the former, non-conformists with enough risk tolerance and patience invariably achieve more success than conformists. With respect to the latter, while non-conformists are more likely to succeed in newer industries where markets and technology are in constant flux, conformists are more likely to succeed in traditional service industries ensconced in systems and regulations.
Regarding the sort of economic success that results from investing one's wealth, the principles...
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Sentence: However, in traditional service industries--such as fnance, accounting, insurance, legal services, and health care--personal economic success comes not to non-conformists but rather to those who can work most effectively within the constraints of established practices, policies and regulations.
Error: fnance Suggestion: finance
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