Nations should suspend government funding for the Arts when significant number of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.

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Nations should suspend government funding for the Arts when significant number of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.

Diversity in arts act as the backbone for making culture of the nation.Undoubtedly, the fineness,the beauty in arts makes the nation famous across the globe.In addition to fame this brings glory and foreign currency to the nation.

In the developing nation like India, Pakistan the availability of monetary funds is limited but the use of it in comaprision is quiet grossed up. The administration should inculcate plans and resources for the upliftment of poverty and backwardness and means in raising the monetary measures. Morever the government policies and programs should focuss on more measures that concoct the motivation of artistic people along with raising of monetary means of the nation.

In the country India the export business of carpet industry brings the handsome money to the people involved in the private sector of this industry.Manufacturing of carpets not only employ the labours but also make use of talent and artistic quality of these labours.In addition to this there are various traditional and seasonal fair like shilpgram organised by the rajasthan state government of india.The focus is mainly on the enhancement of arts and crafts which inturn help in raising funds ,economy of the nation.These fairs attracts a remarkable population from across the globe.

The government funding on arts abridge funds to the people in need of it, instead of wasting them. The government fund is meant to be spent on nation's upliftment, poverty and unemployment eradication. As a matter of fact nation should spend on funding arts so that it promotes name and fame of the nation around the world. Ultimately making it better and renowned for the citizens to live in.

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