It would not be an exaggeration to say that loyality is beneficial or at the least a strong influence. It builts confidence and mutual trust amongst individuals. In today's world replete with chaos, distrusts and remonstrations, loyality still needs to be an essential habit of a person failing which leads to relatnships put at stake.
The author cites that proving loyality to schools, employers, institutions and friends will be beneficial for one's own self or for buisiness. Considering this fact, one can always remember how the principal at school works with all integrity and loyality for the betterment of his/her school. Loyality can be found in any field, let it be science, technology, art or music. To be specific, technology has endowed human kind with many innovatory, paramount discoveries and inventions. One such keen observation could be introduction of gadgets that hav now become easily accessible and ubiquitous. Had these technologies did not pay attention to people's needs, it would not have produce such successful tools with loyality and elite services till today.
Moreover, even in the field of art loyality has not been backed off. Time and again artistic writing, paintings, different kinds of music-the classical, opera, pop and so on have proved their passion and loyality. One can imagine an artist to indulge in any other job they can to stave off starvation and homelessness, but not many are found to do so. Loyality pays off big time, so did it in many a lives of artist's.
Loyality coupled with hard work, sincerity can work wonders in life. It is thoughtfull to think that diverse industries issue a bonus payment for all their loyal emplpoyee's on an annual basis. Being loyal is definetly painstaking, but rewarded to its worth!
In conclusion, the idea to show loyality to any sections of the society has surely promising results, than otherwise.
Sentence: Had these technologies did not pay attention to people's needs, it would not have produce such successful tools with loyality and elite services till today.
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Sentence: It would not be an exaggeration to say that loyality is beneficial or at the least a strong influence.
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Sentence: It builts confidence and mutual trust amongst individuals.
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Sentence: In today's world replete with chaos, distrusts and remonstrations, loyality still needs to be an essential habit of a person failing which leads to relatnships put at stake.
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Sentence: The author cites that proving loyality to schools, employers, institutions and friends will be beneficial for one's own self or for buisiness.
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Sentence: Considering this fact, one can always remember how the principal at school works with all integrity and loyality for the betterment of his/her school.
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Sentence: One such keen observation could be introduction of gadgets that hav now become easily accessible and ubiquitous.
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Sentence: Had these technologies did not pay attention to people's needs, it would not have produce such successful tools with loyality and elite services till today.
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Sentence: Moreover, even in the field of art loyality has not been backed off.
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Sentence: Time and again artistic writing, paintings, different kinds of music-the classical, opera, pop and so on have proved their passion and loyality.
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Sentence: It is thoughtfull to think that diverse industries issue a bonus payment for all their loyal emplpoyee's on an annual basis.
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Sentence: Being loyal is definetly painstaking, but rewarded to its worth
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Sentence: In conclusion, the idea to show loyality to any sections of the society has surely promising results, than otherwise.
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