about the musicians from the past and the present
The significance of revering the eminent person both during the period of time that they are living and after they demise is not stealthy for anyone. Among a diversified constellation of perspectives, some may regard the famous musician persons can be referred a plethora of years after they die, in contrast, other persevere on unravelling the notion that determing one musician one as a reputation can occur during his life. After weighting both dimensions, the latter one seems more plausible.
To inaugurate, the latter opinion based on embracing one famous musician during his life can be srcutinized aptly. Going into the depth, having had some salient remnants of one's music, that person may have an opportunity to demonstrate his true potential and aptitude to a myriad of his allegiances. To delineate, after convincing his devotees that music is an emblem of his hallmark as intrinsic competency, he can accumulate a neumurous ones desiring to compliment him. Thus, who could deny the necessity of the efforts of famous persons to evince their faculties to others in order to be praised during their life?
Another angle demystifying the latter hypothesis is incrementing the channels of success and rearing offsprings after the famous musicians for other generations. To shed more light, only when the knowledge and acccomplishments of one generation are transmitted to other generations, can it be anticipated that the current generation will broaden the scopes of that music or widen others' horizon about sundry aspects of that specific music. Simply stated, in this circumstance, there is the high susceptibility of thriving and reinforcing the roots of traditions and cultures between two diverse ancestors. As a matter of the fact, the music play as one of determining factors in amplifying the level of comprehension of both ordinary and oligarchy ones about traditions. Hence, the most urgent need to actualize this goal is to acclaim the eminent musician ones, especially, during the period of time that they are living to utilize their invaluable experiences and achievements to enlighten the visions of today's persons about their history and fortify their foundation and connection with their past. Needless to say, Here the role of regarding the famous musician person currently can be sensed.
What I mentioned above might not be overgeneralized to whole contexts. Indeed, there are some humans who are more inclined toward the belief that the famous persons, especially, the musican ones should be recognized and detected after their demise. It is all transparent, this approach can elevate their status among the subsequent geneartion to fathom the works of that repudated persons to a higher position compared with the time that they deal with the revert of general public during their lives. That means, parising the ones during their lives is a kind of ephemeral issue which should be avoided. seldom, do all persons are classified i
Drawing upon the reasons, in spite of exsiting some exceptions deviated from the general rule, the benefits of paying the famous musician persons during their lives are too enormous to fathom. To recapitulate the reasons, not only will they have a chance to convey their priceless experiences to the following generations, but also, they may predisposed to a surge of followers who are more penchant to pursue their styles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Suggestion: Seldom
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Message: The adverb 'seldom' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, regarding, so, thus, in contrast, kind of, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2856.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 543.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25966850829 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88969231755 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510128913444 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 909.9 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5273808061 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.315789474 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5789473684 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100563192501 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307194390802 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389695539875 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567635243266 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492824601178 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 173.0 100.480337079 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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