All too often companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees such consultants would be unnecessary Write a response in which you discuss | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statements might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Companies have alot of general issues that are to be taken care of. Sometimes external help is needed. But is there a need to hire someone else to consult the company even though it has its own employees? I mostly agree with this point for the following reasons.

But first, I think that the employees are the ones who make aur break the company. The emeployees are the most related people to the work of company. When the company is in a quagmire, then it is the employees, whose work efficiency will solve the problems. Company should keep taking feedback from the employees every now and then. Then and then only will the company prosper.

But what if, a company has just started and is facing problems that are difficult to solve even for the employees. In such situations, it will be necessary to hire someone to consult for the companies. For instance, when a student is choosing a career, he is not aware about all the career options that are available, even though he has is parents, relatives having a good career. But would he always want to look up to them and be like them or would he like to look for other options that are available which are in his interests and offer lucrative jobs? For this, there are career counsellors who are hired to give the student a proper direction to see the plethora of career opportunities available now-a-days.So, considering the student's situation, there are numerous problems a company faces and seeking consultation from other person can definitely help the company to get out of the difficult situation.

When the company hires someone, he or she is an expertise in the field of problem solving. Therefore, it is more reliable to listen to their opinion. There would not be a single consultant. There are many consultants that can be hired, and depending upon the views of the consultants the final decision that is to be taken depends solely on the company itself. And the company will always take decisions by asking the employees. If we consider the democratic system, there are many people who are advisors. In fact, for every sector an advisor or consultant is there. Even though there are workers in that sector who work day and night, when a difficult situations arises, they first take the advice of the advisors and then look up the possibility of the plan if it is feasible or not.So, like this even for a company this is true.

The consultants that are hired by the company discuss the possible solutions to a particular problem with the employees. The employees are the ones who take the decision. Therefore, it is difficult to say that companies should spend more time listening to the employees as the decision is taken by the employees. Also, the company should be taking feedback from the employees now and then. Afterall, when the company faces a problem it will first turn to its employees and then the consultant. So, depending on the difficulty of the situation and the solutions available the company should make decisions whether to listen to the employees or hire consultants.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, therefore, for instance, i think, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2535.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 530.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78301886792 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6370454194 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418867924528 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 798.3 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.1432481077 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5357142857 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82142857143 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35188766676 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101627363646 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660560275673 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210424654428 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569070455214 0.0667264976115 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, therefore, for instance, i think, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments