The best ideas arise from a passionate
interest in commonplace things.
It is well known that passion is the key to the brightest of ideas. One can put in his maximum effort in anything only if has the inner lover towards doing it. Passion is the ignition for for all the great ideas which has lead the progression of human kind itself. Meanwhile, the interest being in commonplace things is the part which may seem counterintuitive, although it is very true. Alas, one may wonder what is so extraordinary about commonplace things that it can lead to groundbreaking ideas. Well, history has proven otherwise.
Sir Isac Newton, whom we all know as one of the greatest scientists to ever live came up with the idea of gravity when he thought about an apple which fell on his head. This lead to a scientific breakthrough in theoretical physics. Sometimes the greatest of ideas come to a person through the most ordinary events. Apart from being a genious, all it took for Newton for the idea to strike was a passionate interest in physics and a the thought of an ordinary event.
One does not have to be a genious inorder to have passionate interest in everyday things that most people overlook. A cycling enthusiast is sure to have good awareness of certain aspects of physics like friction and aerodynamics even if he does not have theoreical knowledge in it. This awareness is developed by experience and passion because he rides his cycle on a daily basis and have strong interest in it. One day he might come up with a million dollar idea to design a more efficient version of a cycle.
In conclusion, the best ideas can arise from a passionate interest in the most common things. Though it seems banal , the greats like Isac Newton has proved how interest in the most ordinary events like an apple falling on your head can lead to ground breaking ideas.
Genious or not, showing a keen interest in commonplace things can one day lead to great ideas and thoughts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, thus, well, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65989933987 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514880952381 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4802370069 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4705882353 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340171378682 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106216547641 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116351049824 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190840078678 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509602950436 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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