The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The youth are very instrumental to the progress of their immediate environment and country at large. Children in schools are instilled with a sense of competition. Every child wants to top the class, win every sprint race, win every debate, win awards, etc. The pressure from parents and the system makes them very intentional in being better than their peers to be considered successful and be celebrated. Growing up with this mentality only can be detrimental to their success in the industries or fields they find themselves in.
It takes a group of people to make changes in the government. The executive, judiciary, and legislative arms of governments work together to ensure that the nation is progressing and is safe for its citizens. For instance, the president of the United States of America can not make certain decisions alone, the senate and other government bodies must approve the decisions in the interest of the people. Even in universities, cooperation drives the progress of societies and groups.
Although, it is also important to state that competition is almost as important as cooperation because people must compete for positions in government. The essence of elections is competing and bringing one's best foot forward. Young people must be prepared to compete and learn that things won't be given to them easily
In addition to this, people do not work alone in companies, they work with a team of people. Young people who always want to compete will always be concerned about their success rather than the success of the team. Parents, schools, and everyone in society need to teach children the importance of cooperation because of this. Companies do not hire people who can not cooperate with team members.
However, people have to compete to get jobs in the first place. For example, some big companies like Chevron, Facebook, Apple, etc. give thousands of applicants assessments and tests before hiring a few of them. The labor market is extremely competitive, there are fewer jobs available than people in the market. Graduates must have a sense of cooperation but must also be prepared to compete to get jobs and earn a living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The youth are very instrumental to the progress of th...
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...race, win every debate, win awards, etc. The pressure from parents and the system...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06424581006 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74160125727 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54469273743 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8408082247 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.65 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174685594721 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503429020039 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301490833369 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966987035237 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037401398418 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.