The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Oftentimes, when a group faces a crisis the individual the group turn toward to move ahead of this crisis or to solve the problem they are facing is the one known to be the leader of the group. In the prompt, it has been stated that the "best" way to prepare a society's young people for leadership is by instilling a sense of cooperation in them rather than competition. In my opinion, I moderately agree with the prompt for the following three reasons.
Firstly, One of the qualities that a leader of a group should possess is to be reliable in a crisis that the group is facing. For instance, in a software company, there are several teams that are appointed to complete one project such as the designing team, back-end team, the front-end team, all the leaders of different should complete the given project in time while maintaining its quality under the pressure of a manager if different team leaders are not cooperative and competitive in the completion then the project may be delayed. If this case is true, then the statement given by the prompt might not hold water.
Secondly, When one has a great sense of cooperation then that individual might not be suited for the leadership of a group. For instance, when a group is facing imminent danger due to an inside factor that hinders their work, he has to deal with the situation by eliminating this factor, if a leader halts at the time of making a decision and makes the wrong decision of continuing with this factor in the group due to his extreme sense of cooperation, then the group could go through many difficult hurdles. If the given case stands true then simply having a sense of cooperation is not suitable for leadership in an industry.
Lastly, When it comes to politics the leader has to be quick-witted, that is he has to make decisions that do not hinder his or his party's fame as well as help the people he is serving altogether while competing with another party that is aiming for the next election to grab the leaders seat and become the ruling party. In this case, the leader needs both a sense of cooperation and a competitive spirit to stay as the leader of the government even after the next elections and to serve the people, and the prompt stating to not instill competition might not hold water.
In conclusion, it is not necessarily the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership by instilling a sense of cooperation in them instead of competition as without a competitive spirit in a leader he would always try to keep the group together instead of making the decisions necessary and eliminating people who are a threat to the group.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65817409766 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70663416949 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426751592357 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.74482501 60.3974514979 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.833333333 118.986275619 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.25 23.4991977007 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5833333333 5.21951772744 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210776353396 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981186344751 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102663142861 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147119606504 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927604393802 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 14.1392134831 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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