Its an old adage since Darwinian times that nature follows the law of survival of the fittest which indeed is true. It is hard to recall of a case where the most successful or the powerful magnate of any industry-be it politics, industry, government etc-did not hold an innate sense of competition. As a winner is the one who doesn't perish in howsoever difficult circumstances, unlike other mediocre blokes who give in to adversities, it is mandatory to instil a fierce and sportsman-like sense of competition; keeping love for humanity atop the moral hierarchy.
The world of industry gives a clear cut picture; you need to possess cutting edge technology bringing unique products and services to the customers at the best possilble price range. This necessitates the requirement to be fiercely competitive with rival companies and have an upper-hand to survive in the market. Consider the pathbreaking instance of Reliance Jio Telecom industries in the Indian markets. Within a year of announcing its phantasmagorical schemes, it garnered a whooping 20 million customer base with a Jio flagship, sending the competing telecom companies to ruins. The only possible ways for their rivals to get back the previous market share was to pull up their socks and improve their plans to sustain in the telecom environment. Clearly, if the youth of our society does not get ultra-competitive in industry, their adversaries will and push them out of business.
Furthermore, the case of government and politics is not too disparate either. Stepping up the ladder of bureaucracy requires not only an illustrious display of relevant work and dedication, but more so the skill to deal with powerful figures, manipulating or toadying them at times, and also denigrating the deserving candidates to throw them out of competition-which is immoral nevertheless. Instilling only a sense of cooperation in the younger kids, will no doubt make them able citizens who can make an impact globally. But without a skill of bootstrapping oneself up, an average bloke is likely to stay unsatisified with his accomplishments due to unfulfilled potential. Thus, the spirit of competitiveness is a fundamental prerequisite to lead a successful life.
Although, it is not to say that the individuals need to categorically shun away the cooperative attitude towards their fellowmates. In this world of exponential growth, it is seemlingly impossible to keep abreast of all the developments, let alone to master these new sophisticated skills. To make a significant impact on the world, thus susequently requires us to partner with like minded people following a similar goal and progressing together. A sense of togetherness, adjusting with people of different choices than ours is again a skill that has to be consciously acquired, which takes time and effort. Hence, in order to be happy and at the top of the game necessitates the sense of cooperation with other citizens of the society as well as the outsiders.
In sum, the sense of competition is not a skill that one can do away with to compete or even survive in this tough world. Though, it is of paramount importance to learn to comply with other people as well as be competitive to adjust seamlessly in the modern world. As the popular American president said, "Don't pray for easy lives, instead be stronger men".
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: doesn't
...competition. As a winner is the one who doesnt perish in howsoever difficult circumsta...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...requisite to lead a successful life. Although, it is not to say that the individuals ...
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Suggestion: Don't
... popular American president said, 'Dont pray for easy lives, instead be stronge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, as to, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2819.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 547.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15356489945 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20521359392 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 311.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568555758684 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 894.6 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5522958742 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.136363636 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8636363636 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159436437246 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380586763838 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03204513027 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843989385495 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293256346664 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 100.480337079 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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