The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership is government, industry, and other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The best way for a society to prepare young individuals for leadership positions is to instill the values of cooperation, rather than compeition. Having a strong sense of cooperation allows one to attain a greater perspective of not only their own field, but across several fields. This is extremely beneficial in government positions as it allows each member to bring their own knowledge and experience on a community another member might be oblivious to. Moreover, cooperation is crucial in other fields, such as business and science, as it faciliates innovation by allowing for an interdisplinary approach collobarating across various fields.
Cooperation is an important value when entering the world of government and politics. Cooperation between members of government will allow leaders to maximize their efforts of supporting their citizens. For instance, in a single party, or even across different parties, each member brings their own knowledge, experience, and perspective. By collobarting, members in government can enhance their perspective of what each community needs, and thus aid the leader in creating policies that can benefit each subset of society. Further, instilling a sense of compitition to individuals preparing to enter the government world can lead significant disadvantages, not only for the individual, but also for the citizens they are representing. In many cases, compeititon can lead politicans to use artifices to make their way to the top, thus, creating a government more focused on power and leadership than actually helping their community.
In addition to government, instilling a sense of cooperation is important to suceed in various fields that focus on research and development, such as the sciences and business. Cooperation is crucial in these fields to faciliate company growth. For example, take a new start up company focused on creating a new health application for weight loss. In order to succeed, this company with cooperate and collaborate with scientists to create the content of the application, as well as business markers to sell the application for profit. Without the use of cooperation across these fields, this new start up would surely not be as successful.
Indeed, there are cases in with compeititon is a useful motivator. For example, competition often fuels innovation as it forces comapies to compete for the best quality at the lowest price. This of course, is advantagous not only to the company, but also to the consumer.
With all things considered, learning the importance of cooperation is more valuable to beneficial than being driven by compeition. In government, cooperation allows members to communicate effectively, which is most beneficial for the citizens they are serving. In other industries such as business and science, cooperation allows companies to use an interdisiplinary approach to solving problems and producing goods.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, such as, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 36.0 12.9106741573 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2475.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17837523521 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491111111111 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 768.6 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7847536792 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242006285937 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739945744792 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650269250538 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134643107098 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316655729467 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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