The best way to teach is to praise the positive actions and ignore the negative ones

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The best way to teach is to praise the positive actions and ignore the negative ones.

The statement “The best way to teach is to praise the positive actions and ignore the negative ones” rightly emphasizes on recognizing the positive actions one performs but unduly and erroneously tells to ignore the negative ones, which could further lead to damaging the person's behavior or may give rise to bad habits in them.
I am an ardent believer of praising one’s efforts and recognizing them and this is something that I have learnt from my parents. Whenever my mother cooks any dish or tries out a new dish, we as a family recognize the extra effort that she puts into, and that is a way that we appreciate her efforts. To understand this issue better and to elaborate it further I would like to cite a few examples.
A teacher at elementary or primary school has a bunch of kids with varied behaviors and backgrounds, and the school is the primary place where a kid learns many things. Let us consider a small example where a class of students have a sports class where they are supposed to play basketball, and these kids are aged around 10-12 years old. And the class is divided into two teams and we see that one kid is racing towards the basket, but accidentally trips another kid from the opposite team, this wasn't a deliberate act, the kid immediately stops and helps the other kid by giving him his hand, this is an act of kindness and must be appreciated. The teacher must recognize these sort of actions and applaud so that this promotes healthy competition between the kids and encourages positivity and kindness among the kids.But if the kid doesn’t stop by but aims and runs towards the basket for shooting his goal, it is not any deliberate action, it was accidental, so in that scenario until the kids are not injured and until everybody is enjoying and sweating out in healthy and positive environment everything is fine.
But what if the kids are getting violent and deliberately kicking or pushing the other team members just to win the game, that is when the teacher, as the head, must step forward and must not ignore, instead, condemn that these sort of behavior will not be entertained and make them understand that having fun in the game is important and not winning it. Make the child recognize and distinguish between good and bad behavior. If the teacher ignores it as said in the statement, maybe the child will continue this sort of action and that could become a habit and further will root to his/ her behavior too.
Further, it is always believed that some habits become entrenched when a person reaches his/her 30s and it could be difficult to get rid of them. A daily action, will soon become a habit and habit will decide one’s behavior and nature too. So all the small steps and actions that we do or take become the big ripples that decide who we become and do.
To emphasize more on why not to ignore the negative actions, i would like to cite a situation that could exacerbate if ignored.Let us consider a school student, who is a boy, is irritating and making wrong moves on his fellow girl student. And the girl would ignore it, because it was a small and silly move. But he eventually harasses and touches her inappropriately, and this action is noticed by the class teacher, if this sort of action is ignored, this could lead to a serious situation, where that boy continues and may be does it to many other of his friends.This sort of actions should never be ignored, and must be condemned immediately, and mostly severely so that anyone in the class or school does not repeats this sort of actions.
It is the teacher or the parents or guardian who must understand the type of situation and understand what kind of actions to take. If the kid does some positive action, praise them, make them realize that this is always encouraged, so that everyone around them understand that this is a good action, and if it's any bad behavior, even that must be recognized and condemned immediately so that, that sort of an action is not encouraged, and everyone understand that having such sort of behavior will not be entertained and will be highly reprimanded in public, so that it will get instilled in them so that they don’t do such negative actions.
Therefore, i hereby concluding by stating that all the positive actions must be encouraged and recognized, so that everyone around will feel motivated to do similar actions, and all the negative actions can be ignored if they are not deliberately done and if it is not causing damage and harm to the other person can be ignored but otherwise must be strictly condemned, so that such behavior is not repeated.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'ignoring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'tell' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, therefore, kind of, sort of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 43.0 19.5258426966 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 31.0 12.4196629213 250% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 65.0 14.8657303371 437% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 39.0 11.3162921348 345% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 97.0 33.0505617978 293% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3818.0 2235.4752809 171% => OK
No of words: 818.0 442.535393258 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66748166259 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.34796216256 4.55969084622 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56811604469 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 339.0 215.323595506 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.414425427873 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1198.8 704.065955056 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 15.0 1.77640449438 844% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.18594577 60.3974514979 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.9 118.986275619 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.9 23.4991977007 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237532552489 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744283801944 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120545430044 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142851796895 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163786767808 0.0667264976115 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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