The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Every society chooses its role models so that they have a guiding light not only for the present generation but also for their filals. Now, a question arises - Is it sufficient to examine the character of the role models that a society chooses to understand the character of that society? I personally feel that the answer is no for the following reasons.
Firstly, role models or heroes in a society are very less in number. They represent infinitismally small fraction of the entire population of a society and hence, they need not necessarly represent the entire population. On the other hand, a society mostly comprises of common people who work everyday single day to earn their bread and butter. Given the disparity in the kind of livestyle that the role models and remaining society lives, it more often than not that the characters of the heros is different from the larger society. Moreover, the people of a society might only pine to posses the virtues of their role models whilst they do not actually pracitce the demeanor of their role models. There could be many reasons why their role models are able to posses a character they are venerated for. It could be because they are providential or they had the means for a more structured and formal upbringing etc. However, it need no be the case with every other person in the society and thus, they may not be having the same character. Thus, it is evident that the roles models of a society need not necessarly represent the characteristics of the society they belong to.
Secondly, the character of a society comprises of not just the people of a society but also its culture, socio-economic status, religion, etc and there can be a lot of diversity in each of the factors. For instance, let us take the example of India. India is a country that has a very high diversity in its society. While there is South India which celebrates Onam and Ganesh Chaturti as its major festivals, there is North India that celebrates Diwali as its major festivals. In such diverse society, it is practically impossible for the role models who are very less in number to represent or possess all the diversity present in the society. Thus, it is required to not just examine the role models but the larger population as well get a comprehensive outlook of societies that have a vast diversity such as India.
However, in the realms of our discussion, there might be an exception that cannot be overlooked. There might be very small societies in which there is no much variation in their cultures or their lifestyles. One can find such societies in remote islands. In such cases, one can actually understand the character of the society by just exmaining the character of their role models rather than studying the larger population. It is because people in such islands are not exposed to outside world and their cultures and character stays in pristine mode.
Thus, to understand the character of a society, on needs to study a larger population of the society rather than going by only its role models for they need not necessarly represent the larger population and they cannot encompass all the diversity present in the society in them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2649.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 551.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80762250454 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65014808886 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.392014519056 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 859.5 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.804408486 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.375 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9583333333 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28814154958 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981011241197 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805074879126 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191343408677 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433405871002 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.