Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals
People believe that how to determine the character of man and woman is to find out the heroes and role models, because those two kind of characters represent the highest ideals of society. However, I don’t believe that.
First, the character of man and woman already created before the civilization was been made. In The ancient, character already been made because of the physical feature. Man are more stronger compare to the woman, so in the herd, always man go for the hunter and capture the food for the living. And for the woman, they have ability of fertility. They cannot go for hunter, so they will stay home for the other things, like cooking or farming. character was already been made, man is go out for work, woman is stay in home for house keeping.
Second, the character is not created be propaganda, instead they are base on the technology improvement. In the ancient, the only work is to farming or hunter, which seems like not profit to the woman, cause those kind of job require high level of physical foundation. In this case, man have to go out fo the living. However, in our society, most of the job do not require the high level of body condition, instead they need more patient, which require more and more woman join to the job. Consequently, the character of woman and man are changed.
Finally, it might be true that someone believe propaganda give character to the woman and man, because, they believe that when people watching whose kind of propaganda, they will consider only man or woman can do those thing. For example, in the advertisement, woman always doing the cleaning work, and man always working. However, when people back into their real life, they will find out there are too much male doing the living work, and their wife support the family. So, the character of woman and man is not given by propaganda.
All in all, i don’t believe the character of woman and man is given by the propaganda, instead, the character is given by their physical feature in the ancient, technology improvement. So people have to go back to their real life to found out what the realties are. \
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
...already created before the civilization was been made. In The ancient, character already...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...ecause of the physical feature. Man are more stronger compare to the woman, so in the herd, a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Character
... other things, like cooking or farming. character was already been made, man is go out fo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...character was already been made, man is go out for work, woman is stay in home for...
^^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...ems like not profit to the woman, cause those kind of job require high level of physical f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'those things'?
Suggestion: this thing; those things
... will consider only man or woman can do those thing. For example, in the advertisement, wom...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... not given by propaganda. All in all, i don’t believe the character of woman an...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67914438503 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4253271028 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427807486631 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.8751506351 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1052631579 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0766495610528 0.243740707755 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336527976982 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482583267718 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647885215435 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548702345729 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
...already created before the civilization was been made. In The ancient, character already...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...ecause of the physical feature. Man are more stronger compare to the woman, so in the herd, a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Character
... other things, like cooking or farming. character was already been made, man is go out fo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...character was already been made, man is go out for work, woman is stay in home for...
^^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...ems like not profit to the woman, cause those kind of job require high level of physical f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'those things'?
Suggestion: this thing; those things
... will consider only man or woman can do those thing. For example, in the advertisement, wom...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... not given by propaganda. All in all, i don’t believe the character of woman an...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67914438503 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4253271028 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427807486631 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.8751506351 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1052631579 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0766495610528 0.243740707755 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336527976982 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482583267718 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647885215435 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548702345729 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.