Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The statement put forward an argument that a society's character can be determined by observing the role models or heros that the people of that society follows because role models are the ideals of the society. But the claim misses some specific point and does not hold true in every situation.
Examining the role model of the society does not give the clear indication that people of that society actually follows the moral values or principles of that person. People can get influenced by their role models in different moments of life but following their axioms in routine life cannot be predicted. Thus, on the basis of this argument we cannot conclusively understand the characteristic of the society.
Secondly, a society can be constituted by the poeple of different ethinicity and different people can have different role models. It is possible that majority of people can have some common role models and heros but in this case also, we are missing the minority, which does not actually give the conclusive picture of the values that people of the society believe. This ratio can be 60:40 or 90:10 in forming majority and in some cases it is also possible that no clear majority is observed. Thus, in that case also the argument fails. Thus, even if majority of people do get influenced by the role model but actual character of people of society cannot be predicted.
For example, in USA majority of Afro-Americans will find Barack Obama as their role model but at the same time majority of native Americans can prefer Clinton or Donald Trump as their heros. Thus, within the society their can be variations among the people.
Thirdly, even if any person do get influenced by the role model but it does not imply that person will follow most of their traits, values, principles and teachings etc. Different people can be influenced by different characteristics of their role model for different reasons. For example, in one society people can find Charle Chaplin as their a great hero but it not necessary that society like comedy or the people of that society are very jovile in their nature. In different situations and time people can appreciate different leaders and role models. For example, when people want entertainment they some times can prefer Charle Chaplin and some other time they can prefer other.
Though, role model of the society can tell us big picture about the society's characteristics but not the whole and exact picture of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ciety people can find Charle Chaplin as their a great hero but it not necessary that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91846522782 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56938517754 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398081534772 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2084568161 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.944444444 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245021703325 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984021157182 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889496192474 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172082703768 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666333943999 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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