Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Role model or heros, by definition is that, he or she are well know all over the world, they revels their nation and would be some impact their nation's people. It is typically disputed that for examine a nations always consider their general peoples rather then hero's or role model. I personally disagree with the statement and i feel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, society mainly consist of various activitie's peoples.so, to determined society's character should be examine the character of general people rather then heros or role models. Although heroes or role models introduce their ntaions in outer world and sometimes impact on their nation's people but it does not mean that general people also showing the same things. For example, Bangladesh is a good cricket playing nation and has a number one all round player sakib al hasan and all over the world knows that bangladesh is a cricket frick nation. However, it is plausible that people like to playing cricket and enjoy lot but children of bangladesh and also all presents want to their childrea as a doctor or engineer. So, if someone think that aim of the children wanted to be a cricketer, that is actually wrong. Thus, determining societies character based on their hero's or role model does not hold water.
Secondly, assumption not to be capable to firgure out large number aspects. Moreover, people types of occupaional people consist of a society all and every one has impact their society
directly and indirectly, also some senario like different states of a individual nation characterized and people known their own perspective values. For instance, silikon valey of USA well known all over world of their tecnological advances and their creativity. on the other hand las vegas of USA well known their negitive work like drags night clubing or adult doing. So, considerating to american society should to determined overal point of views, not any specific object.
Finally, it is true that role models reveal a society's highest ideas but to determined total society only based on this phenomena, it actually have bring some partial concept about a soceity.heros and role model impact on a soceity directly or indirectly, Though, but society always make their consistancy by their gneral peoples work. For example like, Doctor mohammad younus is a naobel prize person and always people helps by his ASHA organization when BD's economy ws below the poverty line. now the condition of bd are progressive.
In conclusion, though some people believe that to understends of a nation needed to examine those nation's hero's or role models but i personally believe that general peoples are the
prime factor for a nations examination.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...heros, by definition is that, he or she are well know all over the world, they reve...
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Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
... definition is that, he or she are well know all over the world, they revels their n...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'revel'
Suggestion: revel
... are well know all over the world, they revels their nation and would be some impact t...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
... is typically disputed that for examine a nations always consider their general peoples r...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...s consider their general peoples rather then heros or role model. I personally disag...
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Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sonally disagree with the statement and i feel this way for several reasons, whic...
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Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in the following essay. ...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'examined'?
Suggestion: examined
...determined societys character should be examine the character of general people rather ...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... the character of general people rather then heros or role models. Although heroes o...
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Line 7, column 744, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...as a doctor or engineer. So, if someone think that aim of the children wanted to be ...
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Line 7, column 754, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r or engineer. So, if someone think that aim of the children wanted to be a crick...
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Line 11, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onal people consist of a society all and every one has impact their society dir...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Directly
...d every one has impact their society directly and indirectly, also some senario like ...
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Line 13, column 69, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...o some senario like different states of a individual nation characterized and peo...
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Line 13, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nstance, silikon valey of USA well known all over world of their tecnological adv...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ological advances and their creativity. on the other hand las vegas of USA well kn...
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Line 19, column 47, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'societys the highest'.
Suggestion: societys the highest
...y, it is true that role models reveal a societys highest ideas but to determined total society o...
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Line 19, column 116, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... determined total society only based on this phenomena, it actually have bring some ...
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Line 19, column 144, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ly based on this phenomena, it actually have bring some partial concept about a soce...
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Line 19, column 149, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...sed on this phenomena, it actually have bring some partial concept about a soceity.he...
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Line 19, column 460, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... helps by his ASHA organization when BDs economy ws below the poverty line. now t...
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Line 19, column 497, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...BDs economy ws below the poverty line. now the condition of bd are progressive. ...
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Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Prime
... believe that general peoples are the prime factor for a nations examination.
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Line 25, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...al peoples are the prime factor for a nations examination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2327.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 456.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10307017544 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59838624393 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513157894737 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1250655794 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.277777778 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7222222222 5.21951772744 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223147234832 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806038313025 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107556700936 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109944178383 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751205178152 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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