Conformity almost always leads to the deadening of the individual creativity and energy.
A conformist is one who is complacent with the established social norms and values and therefore I concede that conformity could impede one’s individual creativity. however, I personally believe that creativity cannot be bounded inside the walls of conformity. Neither does it limit one’s energy in pursuing any goal.
it is true that in some of the cases, people often follow social values in order to maintain harmony in the society and maintain its dignity. it is therefore possible that these people often hide their individual creativity in order to be alike them. however, conformity is not a predicament to the creative minds to explore their uniqueness. these people often pave a new way and give consequence to their creative idea. For instance, in spite of the conformity of the contemporaneous society that no object lighter than air could fly in the sky, Wright brother remains tenacious in their determination and finally succeeded in inventing the first airbus. Had they just remained in accord with the social belief, human dream to fly around the globe would only have been a chimera.
it is true that in some of the cases, conformity hinder one’s imaginative ideas and creations. however, on long run, such creative ideas would remain no longer suppressed once the truth is revealed. For instance, the geocentric conformity regarding the solar system of the contemporaneous Roman Catholic Church Officials suppressed the truth of heliocentric theory for several hundreds of years. however, after the discovery of Galilean telescope and the accumulation of several evidences, Galileo was able to establish Copernicus heliocentric theory of solar system. Similarly, despite the wide held belief of the conformist society regarding the notion of flat earth, Pythagoras was able to reveal the truth of round earth.
Furthermore, in some of the cases, conformity does not impede creativity but serves as a solid foundation for the creativity and imagination. For instance, all people were in accord with the fact that the falling of apple on the ground is due to the gravity of the earth. however, this conformity encouraged newton with the creative ideas regarding the laws of gravitation and the equation of motion. Had newton ignored the falling of apple considering it a mundane phenomenon, several discoveries and inventions would not happened.
In conclusion, I do concede that social conformity is a force and it does do a great deal in impeding one’s individual creativity and imagination. however, I also believe that a power creation created by an imaginative mind is not bounded by the walls of conformity. An imaginative mind is always able to pave a new away to explore its imagination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24200913242 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95874203288 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46803652968 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 744.3 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7972143462 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184475172167 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571572848779 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525112947482 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106423205106 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272484208592 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.