Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

Sports and social activities plays an essential role in a student’s life. Sports increases health and stamina social activities increases the inner confidence of the person and leadership skills of a student. So these two things are actually helpful for our academics. Here are some of the arguments supporting this statement.
In classes and libraries we can learn and about new things, but it is a waste if we can’t use this in efficient way. Sports opens up our mind to apply the gained knowledge in an efficient manner it provides us the strength to think in different ways if any real time situation arrives.
Same way social activities increases the interpersonal skills of students, activities like debate increases the leadership skills, plays and dance competitions are good for emotional growth of a student. These events also make a student familiar with our culture and traditions.
If we want overall growth of our students we should give equal financial support to sport and social events.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... our mind to apply the gained knowledge in an efficient manner it provides us the strength to think in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 58.6224719101 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 2235.4752809 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 442.535393258 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17575757576 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86708306285 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 215.323595506 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.4932671777 129% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 704.065955056 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6421848552 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177762694382 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742695033448 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528765431147 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113636264387 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053710557496 0.0667264976115 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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