Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There has been years of debate for the exact age a person should be alowed to vote. Some think its best after 18 years of age and some tgink that Above 15 is good enough. In my opinion children over age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
Fifteen years of age is the mid of puberty. Children are still transforming into adults. They have their own problems to deal with and they are still living under their parents roof. At the age of fifteen they are still learning about history and politics. Even at the age of eighteen a child has difficulty finding their own majo,r allowing them to vote after the age of fifteen sounds prepoterous. A child only only gets learner's liscense at the age of 16, if the goverment do not trust them to drive till then, how can they trust accept them voting for right candidate. Any crime attempted by a person below 18 years of age is called as juvenile crime, that means they are treated as criminal who does not know exactly what they are doing. If they are not fully charged with the henious, crime they commit before the age of 18 how can they be considered mature enough to choose their leader.
At the age of 15 children are still juvenile. They think that they have grown up but yet they are quite gullible. If they are allowed to vote, they might vote for someone who promises to fulfill their own selfish demand. If you ask a group of teenagers whether they would vote for the candidate who promises to reduce drinking age from 21 to 15 i bet most of the children would say yes to the question. Buying votes would become easy as for a petty amount of cash a child might say yes to vote. Most importanly they would not know social, economic impact in the country a government is making. They donot have proper education, to understand the political system at that age.
I am sure that the 15 years wont judge a candidate on the base of the cast ,religion or color. but creating a larger voter base is not important. The most important thing is to create a voting base that has pure knowlege of what is good or bad for themselves and for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, as for, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36828644501 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2144822908 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493606138107 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5278353557 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2380952381 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186594834933 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727449639034 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828265798109 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131915866589 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840926145715 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 12.1639044944 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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