Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.

Educational institutions help an individual in their studies.they give good knowledge, information and advice for every students, but it is upto the decision of particular student whether he want to rely upon that advice or he /she has their own decision.

Firstly , since childhood to adulthood we used to go to school for our education. While studying we like some tips or advices which is given by our teachers and sometimes we also follow that things and getting success in our studies. Teachers have their own experience in their life. Their time may be it was different from today's time.but some teachers they search the things before they advise.

Secondly, we can see that during our childhood may be we want to become a doctor,but when we grow may be our choice will change. We have interested in another field. I think decision should be done always by students, but not to be compelled by any institutions .we can see that person who has interest in something they will do those things very perfectly without any pressure. But if you compel them to do something which does not give them ant interest then there is no use.

Lastly,educational institutions has right to give only advice or suggestions but shouldn't force any student to do according to their wish.

In conclusion, student will perform better in those field in which they have great interest compared to Forced one.

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Average: 4.1 (1 vote)
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'i think', 'in conclusion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.205426356589 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.197674418605 0.157235817809 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0542635658915 0.0880659088768 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046511627907 0.0497285424764 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.116279069767 0.0444667217837 261% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.100775193798 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.031007751938 0.0406280797675 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76425885891 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0426356589147 0.030933414821 138% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0581395348837 0.0997080785238 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0348837209302 0.0249443105267 140% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0193798449612 0.0148568991511 130% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1439.0 2732.02544248 53% => OK
No of words: 238.0 452.878318584 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04621848739 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.58838876751 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327731092437 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239495798319 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18487394958 0.200843997647 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13025210084 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76425885891 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 219.290929204 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59243697479 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 59.8962533307 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6363636364 23.380412469 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0869791807 59.4972553346 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.818181818 141.124799967 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 23.380412469 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 0.674092028746 189% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 50.0 5.21349557522 959% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.5859434683 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 0.935483870968 1.64882698954 57% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265567487121 0.391690518653 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106495390225 0.123202303941 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0293498575285 0.077325440228 38% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.612352543011 0.547984918172 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.264404903395 0.149214159877 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115906921111 0.161403998019 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613072849181 0.0892212321368 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.183595857028 0.385218514788 48% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0674170185091 0.0692045440612 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174250256346 0.275328986314 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347020818762 0.0653680567796 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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