There are both positive and negative aspects of using advanced technology to communicate with others. It is my firm belief that this technology can provide new and sophisticated methods to make relationships or communicate with friends and family for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, everyone has a member of his family or a friend in far place because of many circumstances such as study or work, so they need to contact with them using various ways to know their news or any update in their lifes. On top of that, a lot of people use the internet to deal with their relations by see them in video camera, so this may help them to feel they are so close from each others, in comparison with the past, the only way was using telephone for few times per week or month. However, this technology made everything easy, so you can make an interview with human resources in a company in other continent or meet a professor in far university instead of going to different country.
Secondly, some conditions required using the latest technology unless the others are nearby from you like the pandemic Covid-19, during these days no one can go outside his home, so people started to using this technology in enormous methods. Moreover, students in colleges or schools have many benefits from using internet to communicate with their teachers to acquire the curriculum they have to finish.
Finally, dealing with people suing the phone or any application will not give you a full picture about the one in the other side, because the human mind needs to see the person face to face which make the communication better, also human needs to go outside his region to change his mind and see other places to meet the people how loves.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that the new technology allow people to communicate with others in an wasy way and without spending money or loss their time to go to any place especially, students in every place in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ow people to communicate with others in an wasy way and without spending money or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71104815864 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57890899677 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541076487252 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9523911196 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.777777778 118.986275619 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2222222222 23.4991977007 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1111111111 5.21951772744 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0774615371176 0.243740707755 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363787116812 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0114429597771 0.0758088955206 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0443255154113 0.150359130593 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016839038908 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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