The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.

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Self-knowledge is a kind of knowledge that come from individual way ...
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...idual way of learning about somethings. the following recommendation or suggestion ...
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...earning somethings comes after rejection from familiar . I strongly agree with t...
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...ason behinds my position is stated below Own way to learn about somethings , some...
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... Own way to learn about somethings , sometimes gives a better result . when ...
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...things , sometimes gives a better result . when someone has no familiar to take ca...
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...ngs , sometimes gives a better result . when someone has no familiar to take care of...
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...one has no familiar to take care of them . they find their own to survive rather t...
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... than are take care of by their familiar . after rejection from familiar people ha...
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...an are take care of by their familiar . after rejection from familiar people have no ...
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... people have no way to backward movement . they have nothing to loose but gain the...
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...ople have no way to backward movement . they have nothing to loose but gain the univ...
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...ackward movement . they have nothing to loose but gain the universe said by Karl Marx...
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... but gain the universe said by Karl Marx , a great socialist in Europe.people who ...
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...great socialist in Europe.people who are rejected from society, institution, fami...
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...jected from society, institution, family , they do not care about anything what p...
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...ected from society, institution, family , they do not care about anything what pe...
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...m. There movement like as free as a bird . they can learn anything, achieve anythi...
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... anything, achieve anything if they want . Unconventional way of learning ...
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...other fundamental way for self-knowledge . they gather knowledge for their own int...
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...er fundamental way for self-knowledge . they gather knowledge for their own interest...
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...edge for their own interest and own need . they not learning anything for only cer...
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...t learning anything for only certificate . they learning for improving themselves ...
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...ving themselves and survive themselves. for instance, a street child is more decept...
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...ybody can gather knowledge from anywhere , whatever they want . many people are su...
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...ledge from anywhere , whatever they want . many people are survive their life from...
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...hich can learn by individual enthusiasts . so finally i want to support my p...
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...rt my position by above fact and example . without rejection people can not unders...
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...ction people can not understand the life . they learn through experience .this is ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'for instance', 'kind of']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259868421053 0.240241500013 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.161184210526 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0822368421053 0.0880659088768 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0394736842105 0.0497285424764 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0690789473684 0.0444667217837 155% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.148026315789 0.12292977631 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0328947368421 0.0406280797675 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86131900289 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.030933414821 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0625 0.0997080785238 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0131578947368 0.0249443105267 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0230263157895 0.0148568991511 155% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1773.0 2732.02544248 65% => OK
No of words: 297.0 452.878318584 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9696969697 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326599326599 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26936026936 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208754208754 0.200843997647 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117845117845 0.132149295362 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86131900289 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 219.290929204 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511784511785 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 51.1907697707 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.1428571429 23.380412469 60% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5542377465 59.4972553346 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4285714286 141.124799967 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 23.380412469 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 51.0 5.21349557522 978% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.0788840789 51.4728631049 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.63414634146 1.64882698954 99% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331443221943 0.391690518653 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0893682939453 0.123202303941 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0874757492123 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.444893662991 0.547984918172 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128574654336 0.149214159877 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103240563653 0.161403998019 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878269191364 0.0892212321368 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.163076354137 0.385218514788 42% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0362713675475 0.0692045440612 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202127833357 0.275328986314 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888162197974 0.0653680567796 136% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.